1. What is a fitting metaphor for the thing I'm writing about?
A: Do the Revolution, baby! How to heal hundreds of thousands of wounds simultaneously, a quest for reform and restructure in the United States Military, with an emphasis on the army.B: Bridge over Troubled Water, not a quick fix put a permanent solution. C: The Sweet Hell Inside, the military's mad dance of anguish and pandemonium, must we keep doing this to ourselves for the sake of tradition?
2. What is on my mind about my topic?
I noticed that the topic I'm addressing has changed slightly. In the last post, I mentioned that the first article only partially ties in to the punitive aspect of training and the solution for it. As afternotes for the second article, I indicated that I wanted to focus on instituting an atmosphere of trust, kindness, acceptance and personal responsibility, centered around the current Army Values. I need to address this discrepancy.
3. Where am I headed next on my paper?
Professor Crane suggested that I might go to google and look up 'institutional change'.
There will be one focus only. I will grab these three loose ends (1.How can the military training culture be changed? 2.the punitive aspect of training and the solution for it 3.instituting an atmosphere of trust, kindness, acceptance and personal responsibility) centered around the current Army Values. and tie them together. I have a question and a compliment for Professor Crane, I like using metaphorical language in research, it makes it much more readable (if it's not overdone). My question is, will any of these that I wrote this morning replace my current title??